Sunday, July 8, 2012

Playwriting Contests and Movie Shoots


On Wednesday through Thursday, I participated in the Toronto Fringe Festival’s 24-Hour Playwriting Competition. Sixty playwrights were given four items/ideas at the Fringe Club that they had to incorporate in their up-to-45 minute works (a lemur ball, the deepest trench in the ocean, a zeitgeist, and “a bird in the hand is worth two in the bush”) and then we were sent off to write, write, write! (The running of the playwrights; it’s a bit dangerous, really.)

Even with having to teach a class in the middle (8:30am on Thursday) I managed to pull together what might be one of my favourite scripts that I’ve written. I’m not going to tell you about it, because they are in the middle of judging and it has to be anonymous.

I don’t write enough creatively lately; it’s all either academic or personal essay format. I was always known as a playwright but my output these years has not been what I’ve wanted it to be. I love playwriting contests with a time constraint in the way I love academic papers with deadlines; I write best when I’m forced to write with a defined endpoint. That’s when things get done. To be fair, I’m less good at writing at 5am than I used to be if I try to do it more than one day in a row. I wound up writing a piece that was almost 8,000 words long, and I like most of those words. After, I went to bells rehearsal, and then had some celebratory drinks with two of my other successful 24-hours playwrights. Which is a great thing in itself, when you consider that not all playwrights even finish. They’re judging them this week; there are three cash prizes, but the winner gets a staged reading directed by and starring some real theatre luminaries. I highly doubt I will win any of these things, but it is nice to dream and it was great to participate.

Saturday, I shot a short part in a short film that is being submitted to the Toronto After Dark festival.  I don’t do a ton of acting these days, so it was a lot of fun.  The movie, Zombies: A Silent Massacre, is a comedic mockumentary about the Zombie Sympathizer movement, who is trying to get the public to understand that zombies are people, too! (Particularly in light of a recent unfortunate incident.) No, I don’t play a zombie. For better or for worse, lately I’ve been typecast as a doctor; a friend’s stock footage for his website a few months ago, and now this. People just seem to want to see me with a lab coat on, and a stethoscope around my neck. In undergrad, I was constantly cast as a principal or headmistress, and now this; I don’t know whether I’m moving up in the world, or not, though the “principal” designation is closer to my current professor profession.

The shoot was a couple of hours, and featured me being interviewed about the origins of the zombie phenomenon, why they grunt, and what I think about them. I remembered my lines, delivered them to the director’s approval, and tried not to be unnerved by the camera in my face. In many ways, I miss acting. It’s definitely the role with the most direct connection to the audience, and it’s exciting. Being behind the scenes as a playwright or dramaturg is great, but it’s nice to be out there, as well.

-Ilana

Promo: Dina, The Burlapped Crusader

My wonderful friend Jenny's show, Dina, The Burlapped Crusader, is bringing joy to this year's Fringe. Dina is trying to fight against boredom and drudgery, and invites you to leave your cellphones on during the performance, and to use them by tweeting and texting her. The show is designed to stand on its own but be improved by audience interaction and play.  Fringe theatre, I find, even more than any other kind of theatre, is all about connection with an audience; the small houses and collegial atmosphere really contribute to interaction between performer and spectator. Dina's really looking forward to making these connections with you!

Remaining performances are July 8th at 7:30, July 9th at 5:15, July 11th at 9:30, July 12th at 7, and July 13th at 11:30. I am working the July 9th show, so if you happen to be the one reader of my blog who isn't among my friends and family already and would like to meet me, that's where I'll be.

I'll leave you with a promo video for Dina; I'm the bored redhead in the coat.


Off to see more Fringe! If you're in Toronto and not doing the same, you're very silly!

-Ilana

Saturday, July 7, 2012

Fringe 2012 Review: The Other Three Sisters

Johnnie Walker’s life has diverged somewhat from mine since we were two of six young, impressionable writers together in Tarragon Theatre’s Young Playwrights Unit.  Even in high school, I was impressed by his easy handling of dialogue and remembered always wanting to know what was going to happen next in the show he brought in every week. If you had asked me (and nobody did), I probably would have predicted his success. (That class of six also featured Natasha Mytnowych, so I really do feel like a Toronto theatre underachiever.)  Now, he’s of late responsible for last years’ Fringe’s acclaimed A Maude-Lynne Evening and the wildly successful Redheaded Stepchild (both involving main “sister” Morgan Norwich) and is on this week’s cover of NOW. I do some freelance dramaturgy and literary management, my “big” play won an award but never got a full production, and…I write a small theatre blog. So, as I fully disclose my slight jealousy, I must say that The Other Three Sisters is very good, and a lot of fun.

Based (loosely) on Chekhov’s play of a similar name, Walker’s sisters don’t want to move to Moscow from a small provincial Russian town; they merely want to get back across the Humber River and leave Etobicoke. Abandon hope, ye who cross the Humber! Jordana (Norwich), the motherly “Olga” of the piece, tries and fails to keep things together (with ice cream cone cupcakes) in the household for “Masha” sister Gillian, (Jamie Arfin) the artist, not a pianist but the surgically-enhanced star of a Vancouver-filmed sci-fi series; and childish and ennui-filled “Irina” sister Kris (Alexandra Parravano, of my high school graduating class), whose life can be over at the end of a movie.  A deceased father, absent mother and charming but "drifting" (to say the least) brother, Rowan (Julian De Zotti), who may be a boy in a plaid shirt or a subway, depending on when you ask him, round out the sisters’ family baggage. 

The show is arch without being artificial, occasionally subverting theatrical convention with narrative sense. As things spiral into chaos and back again, supernatural and magical elements gradually insert themselves into the plot in a way the audience is more than willing to go with. This is one of the few Fringe plays with necessarily (comparatively) elaborate costumes and props that add to our enjoyment of the evening.  The show is occasionally aggressively wacky; it says something that the audience’s “entry”  into the show, in character terms, might not even really be there.  Each character grounds and then throws the show off in turn, alternately sympathetic and crazed, with an emphasis on crazed. Like Chekhov, while plot is necessary, it is the characters who are indelible.

Jordana is a 27-year-old community college teacher struggling to get enough courses to make enough money to live on her own, instead of at home. Let’s just say it would be tough for this character not to resonate with this reviewer, because check, check, check, check and also check. Norwich is appealingly twitchy as a woman who can’t seem to choose between fending off the madness and giving into it. Arfin is great as the gradually-plasticizing Gillian who describes certain situations as “totally siblings.” Parravano throws herself into a robust characterization of a twentysomething who isn’t quite not a teenager yet, and De Zotti is an appealing and magnetic break from the estrogen who makes you believe in his centrality to the lives of the others.

Though tonally, the sisters can sometimes gets a little over-pitched, shouty and shrill, and it does bother me a bit that, like so many other shows, the larger actress’ body is dressed and played for laughs, the dialogue is smart and funny and revelations intrigue. Watching the show, you get the feeling that, just like Chekhov’s sisters, Walker’s will end up in the end of a Beckett play: “They do not move.”

-Ilana

Fringe 2012 Review: The Shape of Things

As a rule, I don’t go in much for seeing Fringe shows that aren’t original to Fringe; it doesn’t seem to be completely in the spirit of the festival, in my mind, to put on, say, one of Tennessee Williams’ short pieces, unless it’s quite obscure or you’ve put some sort of very new twist on it. With that thought in mind, I hesitated before purchasing my ticket to the Toronto Fringe incarnation of Neil LaBute’s The Shape of Things. While perhaps not Williams-level canonical, LaBute’s work has reached a definite level of notoriety, and I’d likely have a chance to see the show at some point. On the other hand, I hadn’t seen the show and, besides reading “Bash,” hadn’t really overly-familiarized myself with the playwright. So in I went, standing behind a size-two young woman complaining about how she felt like a sausage in her dress and kind of wishing we were about to see LaBute’s Fat Pig instead, so she could experience irony. I leave the question to you: what role does well-known work being remounted have in the Fringe experience? In your Fringe experience? What role should it have?

LaBute has a reputation of controversial topics and harsh truths. The Shape of Things centres around questions of where art crosses the line, and hinges on the manipulative relationship between Adam (Christian Smith), a nebbishy undergrad studying English, and Evelyn (Jennifer Neales), the MFA art student he meets at the campus art gallery. It’s a unique and suitably charming meet-cute, featuring Evelyn’s graffiti-based crusade against a fig-leafed god statue meeting the very passive resistance of Adam’s campus security guard, who just doesn’t want to fill out any paperwork.

Evelyn is the love child of a Manic Pixie Dream Girl and Machiavelli.  The first thing Adam has to say to her is “you’ve stepped over the line,” which neatly telegraphs the rest of her action.  She seems to be the outsider in this “small-town college town” environment, which appears to have a surprisingly radical MFA arts program (though it may just be her). Adam’s other friends, the engaged Phillip (Brendan O’Reilley) and Jenny (Adrianna Prosser, whose character Phillip “stole” from Adam years ago), are more “salt-of-the-earth” than artsy types (with the exception of a quirky wedding choice that doesn’t seem to fit the rest of their personalities), though Phillip even feels the need to win arguments about art. Phillip and Jenny treat Adam’s “improvement” under Evelyn’s watchful eye (weight loss, clothing changes, more drastic surprises) with suspicion and renewed interest, respectively; The Shape of Things We Do For Love.

Though the ending twist of the play is telegraphed (at least to me) early on, the ending scene is still powerful, probably because the cast is so uniformly good. Smith manages to imbue Adam with an easy shy charm and has a very appealing natural delivery. The actor and production also has to contend with having to portray a real physical change over the course of the hour, which was a largely successful endeavour. He has plenty of chemistry with Neale’s Evelyn, who balances fire and ice adroitly, so that one can understand why Adam is “owned,” in his words, and at the same time never really trust her.  O’Reilly is great as the bro you outgrow but think of fondly, and Prosser gets one of the show’s standout moments (not to mention the best outfits) with her apology for not being “artistic” or “cool” enough, which is a message all of us navel-gazing Fringe diehards need to hear every once in a while; we need more Jennies at the Fringe.

LaBute’s dialogue is often sparkly and very entertaining, and even managed to overcome my initial “dear Lord, save us from the musings of English undergrads and MFA grad students” reservations, from my oh-so-worldly platform of having been both of these things five and two years ago, respectively. I was expecting far more offense than was delivered, but the playwright excels in mapping out both the platonic and romantic relationship games played between people.

The original productions of The Shape of Things featured oppressively loud music between the scenes, a soundscape designed, LaBute said, to prevent the audience from comparing notes, and, presumably, ruining the plot twist. (According to The New York Times’ Ben Brantley, Harold Pinter, another canonical writer with a show in this year’s Fringe, reportedly fled from the music before the show could even start.)  The sound design here, presumably from able director Alex Fields, is quite the opposite, with appealingly pretty, blue-tinged indie tunes bookending the show, and silences (maybe too silent) during scene changes to encourage a contemplative mood. I’m not sure The Shape of Things completely succeeds in its discussion of the intersection between provocation and art, but in this production, it’s a worthwhile contemplation.

-Ilana

Fringe 2012 Review: BAD CONNECTIONS?

BAD CONNECTIONS? (a title which is, inexplicably, in all-caps) is a play written by Michael Levesque for Paul Cosentino, a one-man show featuring nine characters whose lives come together via various connections and conversations, culminating in a visit to a guru, in 1997 New York City (the setting, it seemed, mostly to avoid the post 9/11 feeling and to justify the presence of a payphone).  I am a terrible theatre student, because when I heard the play being described as being about “oneness,” my reaction was one of eye-rolling rather than eager nodding and snapping. Luckily, the strength of both script and performer proved lacking in pretension, instead full of sharply-observed “dialogue” and character moments.

Cosentino adroitly fills the shoes of all characters, from a pregnant black teenager to a hospitalized Italian great-grandfather, to a 56-year-old typical Upper West Side Jewish wife-type. He snaps from one character to the next, sometimes in monologue, sometimes in dialogue, occasionally literally tumbling into his next character. His physicality is captivating and his voice work is very good. Though some characterizations verge a bit on caricature (occasionally slightly offensively so), this does serve the purpose of keeping his characters distinct, particularly later on, when they begin to come together and interact at a more and more furious pace. The script, also, makes each character interesting and sympathetic enough that we can forgive some cliché and archetype. To emphasize the connection between characters, the scenes turn on a word, going from the mouth of one character to another. It’s a nice touch, though very “writerly.”

The connections begin to come together in a satisfying way; the writer’s repetition of there being “no coincidence” seems a little like an excuse, but it’s engaging enough not to really matter. One ending vignette gave us a dramatic note that felt unearned and off-kilter with the rest of the piece; the rest of the script is so good at implying actions and connections (one of its great strengths is mostly avoiding any of the clunkiness of introductory exposition in scenes) that I was left wishing that note had been equally well-implied (as it was, in fact, with the last line before the discovery) rather than melodramatically focused on. Some of the characters’ relationships could have stood some further development, (which may have contributed to the unearned feeling of that one vignette), but the play might have gone on forever in that case. These are actually small quibbles with the play, which is very good and skillfully woven.

Make a connection with BAD CONNECTIONS? It’s an intriguing story, told by nine intriguing voices.


-Ilana

Fringe 2012 Review: Medicine

TJ Dawe is Fringe Festival royalty.  You don’t really need this review, because TJ Dawe sells TJ Dawe. And there’s a reason for that; the unassuming curly-haired 36-year-old is a master storyteller. His speech is so soft and quick that you find yourself in disbelief that you can understand and follow everything he says; “surely this must have originally been intended for a 75-minute slot!”  He deftly ties together disparate threads of narrative and symbolism in a way that makes perfect sense.  Confessional stories are wrapped together with rants about keyboard and alphabet organization that produce the release of waves of laughter and ease audience tension. So, Dawe sells Dawe. His first show of Medicine of this Fringe, which I saw at 5:15 on Friday, was nearly sold out.

This is at least my fourth Dawe show featuring him as writer/performer; I couldn’t even count the ones I’ve seen that he’s been involved with. As far as I can tell, when compared to shows like A Canadian Bartender at Butlin’s (which had a particularly raucous pace, and, if I can recall back nine years, had the audience practically begging to call-and-response the recurring jokes), and Maxim and Cosmo (sex and language), Dawe’s shows have gotten more introspective and (apologies for lack of a better term) “new-agey” to date, exploring various psychological, spiritual and naturally pharmaceutical methods of explaining and connecting with the human soul. His last show, Lucky 9, revolved around the Enneagram model of personality- type mapping, and Medicine incorporates theories of the importance of touch and the eye-opening properties of ayahuasca, a psychotropic brew of vines and shrubs, when combined with group therapy. The “believer” qualities of these shows could make them hard to take for a natural skeptic who has a difficult time with these concepts, but Dawe’s nakedly personal retellings of his experiences, coupled with the occasional wink to what a strange journey this all is, mitigates the feeling that one is being sold a belief system.  Dawe describes his process of self-discovery, trying to shake his “stupid friend” the defense mechanism with a weeklong retreat with Dr. Gabor Mate, who purports to break addictions to substances and habits alike. We’re treated to some fascinating descriptions of the ayahuasca ceremony (TRIGGER WARNING for those who have extreme difficulty with the discussion or sounds of vomit) and family scarring.  This sounds painful, but the hour flies by, propelled by Dawe’s quickly-spoken monologue.

In a terrific satirical article, my friend and overall Toronto theatre superhero Pip Bradford mentions the “Fringe shows you absolutely must see,” aka the Fringe stereotypes we all know and love and hate. One of them is “Too Much Information You Never Wanted To Know About Me: The Solo Show By That Guy Who’s Been Touring The Fringe Circuit Since Time Immemorial.” On one hand, this is that kind of show, so don’t say we didn’t warn you. On the other hand, despite some comedic rants that don’t quite pay off (except in the moment, which to be fair is usually the most you can ask of standup), Dawe makes it interesting and funny and well-packaged enough that we don’t really mind the TMI – and he himself recognizes this stereotype and turns it on its head by going meta about his choice to incorporate it in his numerous Fringe shows, particularly this one. And, to be fair to Mr. Dawe, he can be forgiven for giving us TMI, because it’s not, really; we’ve been telling him that’s what we want for over a decade, and he keeps delivering admirably.

-Ilana

Saturday, March 31, 2012

Thoughts on Karl Jenkins' The Armed Man

In November, I sang a piece of music that I mentioned in an earlier post deserved a write-up of its own. Here is that commentary, which speaks to my conflicted feelings about a memorable and powerful work on a difficult subject.


Karl Jenkins’ The Armed Man is a haunting and terrifying piece of music, in a good way. It is based on a hodgepodge of texts related to the “glory,” destruction, and horror of war, from 15th-century poetry, to the Mahabharata, to poems written by a victim of the Hiroshima atomic bomb. Its ability to evoke horror and death in music is exquisite, managing to be beautiful and awful at the same time. Jenkins’ piece bills itself as “a prayer for peace” and is unabashedly structured as a mass, (though an inclusive one; it involves a Muslim call to prayer), but the ending seems to ignore the impact of what has come before, and its attempt to wrap up thousands of years of horror in a triumphal religious bow is also unsettling, this time less effectively.


Jenkins’ piece builds in an affecting and profound manner. We start with “L’Homme Armé,” of the duty of man to arm himself with a coat of iron mail, and the need of all else to fear him. The tune of the piece is not altered from when it was a Renaissance-era secular French song, and then later used as the setting for perhaps more Latin masses (40) than any other song, but Jenkins’ use of rhythms and horns urgently throws us into the middle of the army’s purposeful march. The theme develops almost into a round for the various voices, indicating war’s timeless and circular nature.


There are a few moments of contemplative prayer and variations on asking to be saved from “bloody men” (Book of Psalms). Things take a decidedly more menacing turn with the most military-sounding “Sanctus” I’ve ever heard, though the march also includes a hint of dance beat, indicating the discussion to come on the excitement war breeds. Kipling’s “Hymn Before Action” takes things to a more disturbing level; Jenkins’ choice to end the poem on “Lord, grant us strength to die!” both foreshadows the coming action and emphasizes the irony of having a “Lord God of Battles.” This ironic reading is supported by the report of Archibald Henderson, in his 1930 “Contemporary Immortals,” of a church choir refusing to sing “Hymn Before Action” because the director found the lyrics more fitting to be invoked by “troops of savages bent on slaughter…a primitive, unworthy conception of the Deity...”


This irony continues with “Charge!” where the army is being whipped into a frenzy with “the trumpet’s loud clangor” exciting them to arms; the band’s trumpets and brass play into this, actually exciting the singers and audience with heart-racing melodies set to words by Dryden and Swift. As we are nearly lifted off our seats in anticipation, the irony becomes clear when the horns and choir clash and dissolve in horrifying shrieks as the two armies finally “charge!” each other, deciding “’tis too late to retreat,” and meet death. The screaming and confusion of the choir, building to a dead silence, is bone-chilling, and utterly poignant in its contrast with the excitement and bombast of the piece at the beginning. Soloists, then, in “Angry Flames,” with occasional dissonant bursts from the chorus emphasizing words such as “death,” describe the aftermath of the clash, which is followed by the somber lines of repeated notes and awkward, off-balance and menacing vocal jumps in “Torches.”


Though the end features an affecting cyclical return, the denouement seems at first touching, then rushed. “Agnus Dei” is followed by “Now that the Guns Have Stopped,” a meditation on survivor’s guilt, which features a possible epiphany involving the alto soloist eulogizing a friend who didn’t live, while she was more fortunate than she had believed possible. “Benedictus” is a beautiful and quiet theme that speaks to this epiphany that “better is peace,” and I found myself wishing the piece had ended on this contemplatively beautiful note.


In the end, there is a return to the beginning theme, but instead of L’Homme Armé being the sung text, minor key becomes major, and the chorus sings, “Better is peace than always war.” We are informed that “God shall wipe away all tears…neither shall there be any more pain” (from Revelation). Though it is a pleasant and moving sentiment, the horror of the earlier segment persists to the point that, as a listener, I found myself jarred by the sensibility that it could be “wiped away.” If nothing else, the ethics surrounding war demand that we never forget; "wiping away" the tears encourages us to forget and possibly turn to war once more. It seems petulant to complain about a Deus Ex Machina at the end of a mass, and as a non-religious person, perhaps this ending is not “for” me. The brashness of the ending seemed improper, however; it reminded me of “Charge!”, but instead of the irony we saw in “Charge!”, this brashness and celebration seemed to lack irony, and I wasn’t sure whether to take it at face value. There seems to be two ways to take such pieces as “Hymn Before Action” and “Charge!” – as ironic looks at how the perceived glory of war contrasts its actual horror, or without this irony, at face value, an in-the-moment look at how people deal with war. If we enjoy the former reading, the final piece seems to lose this edge of commentary. If we take the latter reading, the ending is less out of character, but the piece seems somehow less complex without the commentary (though still honest).


The ending, featuring the lovely sentiment, “ring in the thousand years of peace,” unfortunately rings false to me. The lyrics solve our problems for us and cease to ask probing questions like “how?” Perhaps this is asking too much of what has already been a serious and thoughtful work. Again, in a Mass, and in religion in general, God is going to be the solution to all problems; but with such a man-created issue, which has always been potentially exacerbated by religion, how does “god will wipe away all tears” fix it? We should be responsible for the clean-up, or for preventing tears in the first place. I find the comfort empty (again, as a person who is not religious). This is, again, perhaps asking the piece to be what it is not; it bills itself as a prayer for peace, not as a solution or philosophical discussion. But lyrically and musically, some things about it still seem strange.


The most haunting piece, lyrically, of the entire work is the “Torches” movement, consisting of animals being turned into living torches by the thousands, many when they were unable to leave their mothers, fathers and families to burn alone. This is taken from the Mahabharata and results from not a man-made bomb, but from war involving gods, who joyously drink the melted stream of animal fat. This is conveniently not in the lyrics portion used, but the source material cannot be completely discounted. (I do not by any means consider myself an expert in this text, so it is possible I am misinterpreting.) The Mahabharata also features one of the earliest notions of the idea of “Just War” – can the suffering caused by war ever be called worthwhile? The morally suspect nature of war at any time, these ethical discussions, and their relationship to god or gods is not really included; the idea of god can similarly be viewed here as either a black-and-white saviour figure, or a name that is invoked for all sorts of suspect purposes: “grant us strength to die”/”save us from bloody men.” The latter is more interesting, but less likely, given the end. It is difficult, though, to delve into the idea of “Just War” with the attempt of the piece to represent war in a general, rather than specific, sense. Given the inclusiveness of the piece and its use of various religious texts, I also don't think it is trying to promote the sense of a "right" god.


How do we balance the notion of “hope” without giving in to the triteness of a “happy ending,” though it is aurally pleasing and comforting to do so? A reading I can see of the ending as successful is as a somewhat ironic one with an undercurrent of fear; if “L’Homme Armé” as the base of “Better is Peace” does not indicate a change, but instead indicates lack of change, and the possibility to lose ourselves in war again by just taking the music down to a minor key. Perhaps better still would be to have the music break between the two themes. A prayer, a hope for peace, are very good things, but with the successfully contemplative nature of most of the music battling the destructive bombast, a beautiful but somber ending seems more in keeping with what has gone before, as a sense of bombastic sureness is shown in the score to lead to destruction. Showing humanity’s ability to grow, change, and work together, should be weighted against showing its rescue by forces beyond its control.


In the end, beginning and ending with “L’Homme Armé” seems apt; as one war ends, the next begins (humanity’s recorded history has only marked 29 individual years without a war, according to journalist Chris Hedges). The L’Homme Armé theme at the end, then, becomes more of a question: are we going to start again, or are we going to change our tune?


-Ilana